I really like the contrast on the first one, though it looks like thats what you focused on. I like how you can see the hand straining and all the wrinkles of it. In the second one I like how simple it is, it looks like the light is shining really brightly through the windows. Though I think that the first one is probably the stronger peice. It does bother me that the lines in the walls are so straigh and solid, but the lines that form the window panes and the garbage can are more 'wobbley' less perfect. But other than that I think they are good peices, escpecially because they fit together. Which is good for being a concentration :)
Hey yo! Liking the first piece! The hand is solid. However, I kinda wished something would be done with the background. To my dismay, I have forgotten what your concentration is about. Despite that, the value is great. The only thing I'm worried about is the state of the pinky. It looks a bit off... The depth of the 2nd piece is great, and has intimate lines! My only worry is the wobbly lines, like Kathryn stated, with the hallway. I almost feel like I need to see what is outside. After all that reflection and light I kinda of want to. However, without things on the outside, it brings emphasis on the doors due to how they're uncolored.
I really like the contrast on the first one, though it looks like thats what you focused on. I like how you can see the hand straining and all the wrinkles of it. In the second one I like how simple it is, it looks like the light is shining really brightly through the windows. Though I think that the first one is probably the stronger peice. It does bother me that the lines in the walls are so straigh and solid, but the lines that form the window panes and the garbage can are more 'wobbley' less perfect. But other than that I think they are good peices, escpecially because they fit together. Which is good for being a concentration :)
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ReplyDeleteLiking the first piece! The hand is solid. However, I kinda wished something would be done with the background. To my dismay, I have forgotten what your concentration is about. Despite that, the value is great. The only thing I'm worried about is the state of the pinky. It looks a bit off...
The depth of the 2nd piece is great, and has intimate lines! My only worry is the wobbly lines, like Kathryn stated, with the hallway.
I almost feel like I need to see what is outside. After all that reflection and light I kinda of want to. However, without things on the outside, it brings emphasis on the doors due to how they're uncolored.